09GMAT高分心得：写作必备闪光机会
A 1.In this argument the arguer recommends that------
2. This recommendation is based on the result of survey that-------
3. In addition , the arguer assumes that ---------
4. A careful examation would reveal how groundless the conclusion is-----
B 5.in this analysis, the arguer claims that -----
6. to substantiate it the conclusion the arguer provides the evidence that-----
7. besides the arguer asserts that--------
8. this argument is unconvincing for several critical flaw----
C 9. the arguer predicts that-------
10. this prediction relies on the observation that---------
11. At the same time, the arguer reasons that----------
12. This argument is problematic for several reasons-------
D 13. The conclusion in this argument is that in support of this conclusion the arguer
Supplies the evidence that-------further more, the arguer infers that------
14. While this argument has some merit(s),there are several logic flaws that deserve our attention
15. The validity(credibility) of the survey is doubtful(questionable)
16. The arguer fail to convince us that
17. Granted that-----------
姑且承认--
18. We can’t ensure that-----
19. The arguer unfairly assumes that-----
20 The arguer fails to take into account other factors that might lead to(result in/contribute to/explain/account for/be responsible for) -----
21. The fact that indicates nothing about(does not imply that/does not ensure that)
22. The statistical evidence cited in the argument is so vague that it does not validate the arguer’s assumption(that----)
23. The survey on which the argument relies lacks credibility and therefore does not lend strong support to the conclusion
24, The arguer commits a fallacy of ----------
时序性逻辑错误
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25. In the first place-----,in the second place---------,last but not least---------
26. To begin with ---------,In addition -----,Furthermore, the arguer fails to take into account another(several other)factor(s) that might weaken the argument.
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27. The major problem with this argument is that -------
28. Another flaw worth discussing is that(the assumption that----)
29. Finally it is necessary to point out -(several other minor flaws that might undermine the argument----)
证据可疑：questionable
30. Another assumption short of legitimacy is that ----(unfounded/groundless/doubtful/unconvincing)
31. The argument is based on the assumption that--------
32. The reason that ----is open to doubt (persuasive)--should be deleted?
33. The arguer commits a fallacy of the question in assaying(?) that--------
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34. In conclusion the arguer fails to validate/(establish) the claim----
总之，作者未确立自己的观点----
35. To solidify the argument, the arguer should provide more concrete information to demonstrate that-----------
36. The arguer should rule out all the above mentioned possibilities that otherwise might undermine
37. To sum up the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to the assumptions
38. To make the argument more persuasive the arguer would have to provide more information concerning-------
39. As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned and therefore----
40. To make it logically acceptable, the arguer should demonstrate addiontionly the arguer must supply more specific evidence to validate the conclusion----
41. In summary, the conclusion reached in this argument is invalid and misleading
42. Before we can accept the conclusion the arguer must persent more substantial facts to prove that ---------
43. Moreover I would suspend my judgement about the credibility of the conclusion until the arguer can present more factual evidence to rule out the possibility that I/is listed in my above analysis
44. One reason why I agree/disagree with the title statement, is that--------
45. Another reason that prompts me to support/oppose the title statement is that---
46. The most important reason in favor of my position is that---------
47. There is no denying that--------
48. Although I agree that---------,I insist that-
Catchword(流行语)
49. Many people sincerely believe that---------
50. However, one does not have to go very fear to see that-------
51. Another assumption in favor of---------is that-----------,but what they fail to understand is that-----------
52. Some people may also assume that--------
53. However careful examination would reveal that----
54. As the saying goes-----
55. There is much concern over the issue of------
56. Some people claim that----while others assert that----------
57. In the lase analysis, I would agree that-------
58. The issue of---is very controversial one
59. Although many people believe that -----,I would argue that-------
60. According to the title statement --------
61. As opposed to the commonly held view, I would insist that-------
62. One does not have to go very far to see the truth of this argument
63. For example ----------For instance, To illustrate--------,As an illustration-------
64. Story/case/personal experience serves as a typical example
65. A case in point is-------
66. Conducted by the department of manager of Peking University (among the top 10 company in 1999)
67. Professor --,a distinguished scholar in management said
68. To conclude ,there is no easy solution to such a complex ====issue.However ,taking into account all the dimensions discussed in the above analysis might be the first step out of this dilemma
69. In conclusion I believe that----not only because----,but also because-----
70. In conclusion ,while some people may remain unconvinced by my argument ,the reasons I have analyzed so far should at least make them aware of the complexties of the issue under discussion
71. There is little doubt that more and more people will come to realize that---
72. In sum ,it is very likely that people will never be able to arrive at the same conclusion on this controversial issuedue to their different experiences and conflicting====== values.
73. Nevertheless public awareness of the complex dimensions of the issue will certainly contribute to the understanding of the situation We have to confront.
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