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托福写作常见病句分析(五)

41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.

 

42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

 

改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

 

43. They will learn the bad habits.

 

改进: They will develop bad habits.

 

44. In this continued process, people make progress.

 

改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

 

45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

 

改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

 

46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

 

改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

 

47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

 

改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

 

48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

 

改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

 

49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.

 

改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.

 

50. I felt alone.

 

改进: I felt lonely (编辑:雨巷)